Catchy personal statements

I've blogged before about the importance of starting your essay with a "clincher," something that will convince the reader your statement is worth reading: I found this short piece in the Stanford Magazine worth a read. The author compiled a list of first lines from the application essays of Stanford's newest college class.

Some of my favorites:

Unlike many mathematicians, I live in an irrational world; I feel that my life is defined by a certain amount of irrationalities that bloom too frequently, such as my brief foray in front of 400 people without my pants.

When I was 8 years old, I shocked my family and a local archaeologist by discovering artifacts dating back almost 3,500 years.

As an Indian-American, I am forever bound to the hyphen.



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Quick tip: Personal statement content

On September 8th I wrote an entry on the number one mistake I see in personal statements (wordiness). Today I'm writing about the number two mistake I see.

Writing an essay that is not distinctive to you is a waste of a chance to sell yourself. If any sentence in your essay could have been written by someone else the phrase should be omitted.

The goal of your essay is to highlight your accomplishments and activities and demonstrate how the qualities you have garnered from them will make you a good [insert doctor or specialist here]. So if you say, "Internal medicine is an excellent specialty because it encompasses clinical medicine, research, technology and preventive care" you are not writing a personal essay. You are simply writing an essay... and a dull one at that. This concept is valid for medical school secondary essays as well.


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Secondary essay dilemma

Many of my med school applicant clients have been emailing me about their frustration over the number of secondary essays they have to complete. It might sound like a nice problem to have but remember that many schools send out secondaries indiscriminately - to all applicants from whom they received primary applications. It's cynical but true: Secondaries are a way for schools to make a little cash.

I recommend the following to keep your workload to a manageable level:

1. Start to prioritize where you want to attend school. If you've applied to fifty schools (some people do) and have received an equivalent number of secondaries, this is the time to consider which schools you want to eliminate. Don't be flattered by the fact that you were asked to complete secondary (especially because, as mentioned above, some schools send them out to all applicants).


2. Try to use the same essay for several secondaries. With some small changes (or better yet, none at all) an essay may be versatile.


3. Get help from a professional. I edit scores of essays every month. I offer secondary essay editing as part of my services.


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Competitiveness of a specialty's match is related to projected income

Mark Ebell, MD (University of Georgia) just published an article indicating that a higher salary in a particular specialty tends to mean more U.S. med students fill residencies in that specialty at academic hospitals.

For example, family medicine had the lowest average salary last year at $186,000; it also had the lowest share of residency slots filled by U.S. students (42%). Orthopedics, on the other hand, paid $436,000, and 94 percent of residency slots were filled by U.S students.

I think it's hard to blame U.S. med students for this trend: the Association of American Medical Colleges reports that the average graduate last year had $140,000 in student debt (up nearly 8 percent from the previous year). Yikes!

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Study shows waning med student interest in primary care

Hauer, et al published an interesting study in the recent issue of JAMA demonstrating that only two percent of nearly 1,200 fourth-year medical students surveyed plan to work in primary care internal medicine. (Click here to view the abstract.) Factors likely include lower insurance reimbursements for primary care visits (Medicare's fee schedule pays less for office visits than for simple procedures) and associated lower salaries.

Interestingly, 19.4% of the med students studied responded that their core IM clerkship made a career in general IM seem more attractive, whereas 48.8% responded that it made a career in subspecialty IM more attractive.

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Quick tip: Personal statement length

The number one mistake I see with personal statements is wordiness. Remember to keep your essay at a single-spaced page or under (forget the word count) and avoid flowery language. As my colleague Dr. Presser says (see the bottom of this blog for his credentials), a writer should imagine s/he is being charged for each word.

So when you read your PS draft say to yourself, "If I had to pay $5 for each word how would I save myself some bucks?"

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How important is applying early?

Because yesterday was the day when students could start applying to residency programs through ERAS, I've had a lot of clients recently ask me about the importance of getting their applications in now. These are my thoughts:

1. Yes, getting your ERAS in early helps. At the beginning of the season there weren't many ERASes to review so I recall giving more time and attention to the early applications. I was also impressed by students who could get their materials in promptly.

2. On the other hand, if your application is not in its best shape then submitting early is a huge mistake. Waiting a few weeks is absolutely preferable to submitting a suboptimal ERAS that will be tossed into the "do not invite" pile.

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